This is fantastic Aline, I love that you managed to put this on old parchment paper; very creative! Your writing gives a strong sense of the growing hate Iago has for Othello and all of those around him, and you have used language carefully so that it feels authentic. Your response demonstrates a strong understanding of the context of the opening of the play, and an excellent knowledge of all of the factors that contribute to Iago's plot for revenge. Well done. 8/8 Criteria D
This is fantastic Aline, I love that you managed to put this on old parchment paper; very creative! Your writing gives a strong sense of the growing hate Iago has for Othello and all of those around him, and you have used language carefully so that it feels authentic. Your response demonstrates a strong understanding of the context of the opening of the play, and an excellent knowledge of all of the factors that contribute to Iago's plot for revenge. Well done. 8/8 Criteria D
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